Okay so im writing a story about this girl that’s really messed up but hides it well. Her dad is an alcoholic and her mom died when she was nine. She puts on a fake smile for everyone because she thinks that if she shows her true self people won’t understand. Social services finds out her dad is abusing her and she is pulled her out of her home to live with another family. They are almost to perfect. She falls in love with their son, Liam.

Any suggestions? Thanks (: